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30 May 2010, 09:11 AM
Doug Spaulding
free verse . . .. . . . or not.... to life
Harvey's posts remind me of the Bob Dorough (words by Lawrence Ferlinghetti) song, Dog, except that Ferlinghetti is slightly less-confusing.


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30 May 2010, 03:52 PM
<harvey101blind>
say my name doug
30 May 2010, 05:55 PM
Doug Spaulding
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31 May 2010, 08:14 AM
fjp451
To sleep—perchance to dream. Ay, there's the rub!
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come,
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil,
Must give us pause—there's the respect
That makes calamity of so long life.

Memorial Day 2010...Peace!
02 June 2010, 05:18 AM
<harvey101blind>
these quills , brain chills , souls leakin out my nostrils , but thisd is what happens when you loose your mind ,that shit gets hgard to find
i found my soul in bowl of tv remote controlls , it looked like an alien fetus , i go to grab it but time freezes , film skips to negative , i'm yer smi-detective trippin on paper hits , the mirrors big rise , and my wide eyes as i crawled into it , tried to come back out but i broke it . shaRDS of glass and my yellow ass
02 June 2010, 01:25 PM
Doug Spaulding
quote:
Originally posted by harvey101blind:
leakin out my nostrils

By coincidence, I used a Neti Pot today!


"Live Forever!"
03 June 2010, 05:41 AM
<harvey101blind>
so you know ....
06 June 2010, 12:18 AM
dandelion
quote:
Originally posted by Doug Spaulding:
Harvey's posts remind me of the Bob Dorough (words by Lawrence Ferlinghetti) song, Dog, except that Ferlinghetti is slightly less-confusing.


They kinda remind me of when a spammer lets a bot choose the words for emails or message board posts.
06 June 2010, 07:25 AM
<harvey101blind>
why dont you guys try some freestyle . i enjoy all your insight into my writing style , but why dont you put up something original .

we played a warriors game of love tag ,
she kissed me deep ,
i fell asleep ,
in the love in her eyes ,
her sweet slow smile,
to all of my suprise,
eternities where motionless for a time,
with her lips on mine,
grapes straight off the vine,]
moonlight and starshine,
together forever,
for a night
07 June 2010, 10:12 PM
dandelion
Alas, I am not clever enough to invent this stuff, but I am willing to contribute the headers to my latest spam emails, starting with this:

"you abide? no her. Be earthbound or dandruff."
08 June 2010, 06:38 AM
<harvey101blind>
oh buddy that was both cowardly and brave at the same time . if you can't try it , knock it i guess ?????
zach morris wouldve high fived you for that one
08 June 2010, 09:14 AM
Doug Spaulding
quote:
Originally posted by dandelion:
"you abide? no her. Be earthbound or dandruff."

That's just beautiful!


"Live Forever!"
08 June 2010, 01:33 PM
philnic
quote:
Originally posted by Doug Spaulding:
...That's just beautiful!


More beautiful than the first line of my latest received spam:

"mutual short soon combined Christopher Widely set South Gutteridge story most than Saskatchewan in Astronomy to The to be including Michael Sarkozy Sunset and omit became out fall Toyota II separately a government any Antonio modern seen"


- Phil

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08 June 2010, 05:47 PM
fjp451
Exactly...indeed...this I teach....taught...cellphones...i...pods...killed the art...rb's...murderer...50 years...told the tale...with french chocolateicecream...Mr. Brock's favorite flavor...me2!

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09 June 2010, 05:15 AM
<harvey101blind>
very good . but let me point out , none of you have once put up a poem of your own , to be held to any scrutiny . it's ok though guys . you show more than you know